My dandavats to you Sriman Uddharan dasa.
To be brutally honest, Lilavati Devi and I think the article by Jagadananda Prabhu is a difficult read even with your corrections.
As Lilavati said “it is not succinct enough and doesn’t flow.”
A little “bombastic” I would add.
Then, following the line of being “brutally honest”, I don’t see how you could have written this to me just three days before (4/14/20), which pertained to the same article:
A few typos corrected otherwise okay.
Please explain how there could be such a vast disparity in your opinion.
Also, I had written to you:
Attached below please find “COVID-19_ The Krishna Karuna Virus” as edited by you with my additional remarks.
Please look them over.